Wow, a neat poem. Very inique I think.

The first part is better than the last, but I like it all the same. Nice work.
~Toireasa

You know who I am and I can't sign in to review anything of yours anymore... hee, I love this... write more T&N... please? Thief and Nob, eh? That's different...

~Celtic-Mage

Cool, tho' Iv'e already read it before..."She looks back at me, her wildness gone" could be changed t' 'She looksback at me, the wilderness gone', or something...Needs very little work.

Wow! I like this story. I looked at the summary and thought - okay, you are psychic. Do you know that for the last 6 years my favourite imaginary creature has been a huge golden dragon called Corinth! Talk about coincidence!

Back to *your* story. I'm not sure rhyme is completely appropriate, but it's not bad. Could do with a little smoothing out, not much though. I like the ending - it's not completely conclusive, leaves you with the idea that there will be more, without breaking off abruptly.

Yay...Thief and Nob, eh? I think that was supposed to be NobLE, right? I like this...I can't make fun of anything in it, party pooper...*grin*

~Dragon