I really, really like your descriptions...very vivid and flavorful! My favorite lines were: "I find nothing but frost, speckling the once-green grass" and "Assumed destination, without a map to guide." Both of these lines bring up very powerful descriptions and emotions. Well done.

Cheers,

*Desecre Demorte*

wow... i really like this one! you are awesome, i hope you keep writing! though the rhythm isn't quite right here, i like it. the images are vivid and graceful with a certain amount of surpressed emotion. wow, that sounded really... wierd. oh well. what i'm TRYING to say is, i like the poem! keep it up!

I liked your message.

Heart of the Sword

Hm, this one is quite thoughtful and deep. Makes you kinda think. You could be great with your talent! Well, you are great at the moment, but you get the drift. Never stop writing!

searcher of souls

WOW! you're really talented! keep writing! _ keep it up

*Claps* Very nice work. I really like the way you write. Keep it up. )