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| Loriena 2002-10-01 ch 1,  | abuseAnother great poem like you. Again, you should try to get some of your poems published in a collection with things by others. Again, it has potential. And again, it's all TRUE. That's one of the best elements in your poems- they really relate to reality and tell it like it is, while keeping the same mood of angst or whatever genre you're using. I think that if I printed these out and showed them to my friends they'd be amazed at your great poetic skills... POTENTIAL!!!! |
| Lise-chan! 2002-09-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseperfect. exactly right (atleast in my opinion) and great poem. |