Oooh, I like this story a lot. ^_^ Please keep writing.

go on! I wanna know what happens!

Um... *cough* I just read your bio.

I'm sort of unsure what to say...

Well, I got the point that you were interesting...

Er...

But don't worry, I still love your writing. :)


--ThePenMage

Wow. You're writing is so advanced, so sophisticated! It is a pleasure to read such a well-written story. I also love the plot. I really pity Darien, I really do. He sounds so sweet, and I love his name. Are you going to update soon? It's been almost 3 months. You really shouldn't keep us waiting like this.

I'll be looking for more!


--ThePenMage

This is a good story so far. Sailor Moon rules. Harry Potter rules. :) Neopets.com is cool. And your story is great so far. So ... who exactly is the main character? And ... the first girl ... is she Marilla or Sanaysha?

sry i didn't sign in! terribly lazy! i just noticed this story and it looks good! please write more!

I like this so far and it is very well-written, I especially like the way you switch between viewpoints, the detail you give to the world without going over the top and your description is excellent.

The only implausibility I found in the story was the prospect of Cedric marrying a servant. After all if Darien is looked down upon because he is just the son of a local knight, how would the subjects, government, etc. react to a queen who was merely a servant. That was the only part which struck a wrong note, especially considering the thought given to the rest of the story.

Anyway, I hope you update soon as I want to know what has happened to Sanaysha and what Darien is going to do with himself.

This is a really, really, really good story. Please continue. I can't wait to see more.

ps if you don't like my stories you little had on. Dont read them there are plenty out there who do. so why dont you take theese retarded stoires of harry pothead and their retardede little friends and go fuck them.

That's great! You write really well, with all the descriptions of the people and things! It's really interesting! Please add more! ^_^

wow...cool story....write more@

wow...cool story....write more@

wow...cool story....write more@

wow...cool story....write more@

wow...cool story....write more@