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| FaeryHybrid 2004-05-14 ch 1,  | abuseWow. That exact thing happened to me- almost. I was thinking the exact same thing one day but it wasn't his eyes that saved me, it was his voice. The song "Sailing". So yea, that was a little close to home. Well done. |
| Kasia 2003-03-20 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, that's a true story? |
| Nic 2003-02-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is truely gorgeous you know? The way you've written it is so good it's just.. Wow. |
| Pro Hunter Curarpikt Kurata 2003-01-11 ch 1, | abusewow.. this poem is so...touching... |
| Clearly Bored 2002-09-05 ch 1, | abusewow. i actually felt that way before. I never really liked the song "God Must Have Spent...", but I was really having a bad day and just wanted to do something to make the pain go away. Then I remembered that song helped a girl live. I decided to listen to it and those fab five helped me keep myself safe. Their awesome voices gave me strength. I started to cry, listening to those awesome words. Ever since then, I've tried to be really optimist, even though it can be hard. I especailly cried during JC's solo. JC helped saved me, you, and aonther girl, and I would bet many more. I'm happy he helped me and those beautiful eyes, I just love to look at them. And when i do, i kinda feel strong, like he's helping me through my tough times. well, i think i should shut up now lol I love Nsync and JC for helping me through my tough time. -Christine |
| Kallie 2002-08-17 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is very intense..and well written. Great job. |
| jkc 2002-06-06 ch 1, | abuseChicka...this is gonna be such a lame review, but this was absolutely beautiful! I really loved the lines "It's the gloss...blind delusion." This was so well written and I love it! |
| EBS 2002-05-30 ch 1, | abuseOMG. That was so beautiful. It was absolutley amazing! What's even more amazing is that a man could have such affect on someone. The way you described everything, how they sing to you, it was just awe inspiring. Sometimes I feel that way, and the only thing that can bring me up is the music of 'Nsync. Just know that you can always fall on them and God. Well I guess you already knew that, since you wrote this poem, but just know that there's always hope. No matter what you're going through. God bless Love ya-EBS |