This is dark and to the point! *hug* Love this!

loved it and hope to read more of your poems!^ ^

short but sad. get's it's point across loud and clear in only a few lines. wonderful. ^^

short simple and gothy a dark and beautiful combination

^_^

evil pop ups! oh what...whats 'Jarded'? oh well, i think this is really good, i like it!

Really liked, short but I thought it was great. Maybe you can rephrase the ending
? I dunno just a thought. very good.

Exactly the feeling.