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| Tyger Mizu 2003-12-28 ch 1,  | abuseThree words: so very true. Good write. ^_^ |
| Conker 2003-01-17 ch 1, | abuseI like this. The imagery in this poem is great, especially the petals falling in the blood. It expresses your pain in a fluent and original way. Keep writing |
| Lavender Clearwater 2002-09-08 ch 1, | abuseI like this poem. It's rather intresting. I am very fond of Roses, so this is a cool poem for me |
| xCrushx 2002-09-07 ch 1, | abuseIntense...very capturing |
| Bloody Moon 2002-09-07 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. I really liked this one! |
2002-08-16 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is a cool poem!! i like it! you convey your anger and sadness well |
| da_crazy_lil_wulfie 2002-08-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseloss of words.... but beautiful and WOW keep up the good work babe |
| Kowski 2002-08-07 ch 1, | abuseMelikes! Just some constructive critisism tho...try not to repeat yourself too much (I.E. Crimson, instead use scarlet or something) |