intresting definite twisted darkness but insanity isnt always a bad thing

Before I mention stuff about this, I just want to say sorry for thinking your author name was 'puddle of pain' I thought that was your name not the name of the story >.

Brit: O *Drool* Wow...cwan I replace you with Kristi? I need some more insparation. And your pictures are so pweety ^_^ Insanity kill eh? Oh, and Kristi didnt fell like reveiwing. heh, sorry ^_^ *Hugs your poem though* O ^_^!

Love it! the dark evilness is so cool! you culd get a gutair and make a song out of that!

Wow. I've been reading poetry and writing it for 7 years, and this is at the tops.
Keep up the great work, Beautiful Girl. (Remember, your writing shows your beauty on the inside. We can all see the beauty on the outside- make sure you do, too!)

Windows can sing!

I love the rhythm of this.

Wow, Cat (Almost typo-ed 'bat'), this is truly wonderful. The images really came alive. Beautiful. Beautiful. Beautiful. I can't say it enough. Wonderful poem! ^.^

...really nicely done! good job..i like.