no, dont fix this poem. dont fix it at all. i like it...i've thought those same exact thoughts. jus remember that there will alwayz b ppl who care for u...even if u think there's no1 left

we're teenagers...i suppose it's normal to think of suicide occasionally, so i can't yell at you, all i can say is that i would miss you. so no. bad. suicide is bad. and the poem is good. but suicide is bad.

its going in my favs. good poem. i can relate

don't die... I wanna be first... Pooie.

I love the ending!! How mysterious!! This is such a great poem! Trust me, I can relate!!