My goodness.

Nevertheless, I quite like it. I wouldn't change anything; I love the word mix-ups.

wow, that is crazy! And really awesome - cracker twist at the end - I was expecting it to be just a 'normal' teenage story, but no..hehe

-Write On

'Brendan then expanded his knowledge of physical science, specifically the function of elections.'

are you trying to kill all your readers throught inducing endless fits of hysterical laughter (or hysterical smirking in my case) before they live long enough to review?

stupidity is not incurable however in my opinion. i'm just a die hard optimist i guess.

love it, write more.

That is so cool! Can't believe you don't have anyother reviews for wish I was an optical Illusion I'd like to jump around class un noticed but until then I'll have to be content copying bravo! the morbid chaoticness (that a word?) was good!