Reviews for The Broken Mirror

sand dance 2003-12-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseit's good, especially considering it's so short
Frodine 2002-11-06 ch 1,	abuseI think this was very well written. A little longer might have been nice, but I still enjoyed it. The way you said the robber looked in the mirror was very cool. You almost didn't need to say that he saw her, because she saw him in the mirror, so if he was staring at the mirror, he probably saw her. Then she would throw the tape dispensor and we would know for sure he saw her. I liked it very much! Keep writing!
Individual-9086 2002-09-24 ch 1,	abuseGood writing, you show a lot of promise. Your action is great and I love your characters, although it all happened to quickly. Usually bank robbers are more professional, with less tendencies toward random violence, but I liked it nonetheless.