nice
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It's so deep. There's this hidden deep meaning thingi that makes the whole thing even nicer and more beautiful. Great work! ^_^

This is going to sound weird, but I think you're being too specific. D*! I knew that wouldn't sound right. How to say this . . . You can leave out words like 'and' + other defining stuff. Other than that, wonderful poem. (I say you should post the Sea Cucumber one up somewhere). BTW, if you huggle me I'll have to kill you.