This was excellent, a very poignant example of yearning held back by fear. You know, this could be an inspiration for a Picard/Crusher fanfic...hm...

i loved this poem...it was really beautiful n touched me right here *points to her heart* ...yep you really really write well...n my u have written loads...must go read the others...

That is a really lovely idea! And so sad ... beautifully written. :)

;_; *cries pitifully* THAT'S TERRIBLE! Not the poem, but it's so sad! Oh that would be majorly lousy! *wails again*

Beautiful poem, however. :) Wonderfully fairytale-like and mythical and magical and all that jazz. :) I dunno what to say! It was wonderful! I wish it hadn't ended so very terribly, though. :( Poor little flower. *hugs it* lol _ Great job! This is one of my favorites of yours! MJ

This is amazingly good... It makes me want to go and find the story that inspired you and read it... it had such a sad ending though... oh, well - most love stories do have sad ends don't they? Must go and read more of your poetry! )

Very good, it should be turned into a story, then it would be great! (not that it isn't already, it's simply wonderful) I like it, I love it, WRITE MORE!

omg, that's beautiful and so sad, and wow, really good

you should make a story on this one! but it's also pretty good as a poem...i just love tragic, angsty, romantic things! ;)

btw, St. Tail IS pretty good!