Another Great work. I like the flow of it and that despite it's dark nature, it has a hopeful outlook.

i like all of your stuff. its way cool and deep.peace

I'm not usually one to enjoy depressing poems as they are overdone, but you have a way with words, allowing your poetry to stand out above the rest.-FAV AUTHOR'D-

It's great. No doubt about it. The description is vivid and the end is sort of sweet. Great poem.

Its the worst thing.they tell you to live.but if they knew what it was like then they would do the same thing.The worlds just full of fakes and hippocrits and we live another day just for them.This was wonderful.Keep writing.

Wow, I love your poem and I can really relate. I'm adding you to my favorites...keep writing, i love them

sorry to bug you, but the link I posted didn't work for me in the last review and I wanted to give it to you.

BUS--w.busmail.org/phpBB

Your poem link--http://w.busmail.org/phpBB/viewtopic.php?p=554135#554135

sorry.. *blush*

Wow.

I'm seriously speechless.

I have a new favorite poem! Great job!

absolutly love this, adding to fav's

It is so true that the people who we love are what keep us from ending everything quick and simple. Wouldn't it be nice if you could just end it with out though clean and simple? Well the people around us would never let that be. They would hurt, hurt more then me, and that's what keeps me here, what keeps everyone here and you have to thank everyone around you for keeping you sane and giving you time to heal each day.

I know the feeling...so well...it's strange. Last night these exact thoughts were going through my head. I sat there holding my arm with various sharp objects in my hand wondering if I should just make a dent in my skin like all the last times, or to do worse damage. I couldn't do it. I just couldn't. And now I'm going to choose joy. Choose joy instead of death. because in the end...it'll get me much farther.

Wow. Thats extremely well written. The rhyming was excellent. The theme is dark, But melikes it anyways. Excellento!!

wow, that was very deep, i understand it, sort of, i wud more but i have nothing to make me wanna put my blades away, but still i kinda understand it, very very good.

You know sometimes I get lost in your writing and I couldn't sum it up in 1000 reviews. made me feel like I'm there.. *hugs* I can't put feelings into words right now so I hope you'll hear more than I say. "you and me we're in this together now, no nothing can stop us now, we will make it through somehow, you and me, even after everything, you're the queen and I'm the king, nothing else means anything"