The first chap made no sense, to be honest. :(
But I liked the other chap.
The word I am looking for is 'animeish'.
Keep writing.

Um, what?
This made me question A) What was going on, B) Who these "people" were, C) What the ** they were talking about, and D) What was going on.
I am very confused. Yes, this was odd and strange, but I'm not sure if it was in the good way. If there'll be more chapters, fine, but that doesn't change the fact that I still wanted more at this stange. Maybe I'll like it more when there IS more. Hint, hint.

Nooooooooooo Not his Headmeats!!!!!

Good story buddy. I put it on my top ten list of all your stories...

...yup...

The future is grim! But then... so is the present.

-monkeytaco class of '02 of doom!!!!