Very, very good poem, I like it a lot, dark, good

Great! I think this is really good! Dark...but good!

Awesome... very deep. Gonna do my best to muster up a nice review... my stomach's killing me (I'm starved *sweatdrop*) and I'm tired but I don't want to forget to review this later. There's a lot of lines and words I loved here. Tempting you with jeweled expectations... that was definitally a good one. Everyone has seen or wanted something very badly that would have come out of taking the dark path. The introduction was alluring, I like the description, which might I add you have a lot of and that's a very good thing! Nice nice ending with a clear moral. Taking the dark path no matter how tempting and wonderful it may seem will leave you with nothing bout troubles and pain. I love this one! Good job!

Your fate can be determined, can't it? I really like this, its very strong, and true for that matter. Keep it up!!

Hi Kristi! This is my favourite poem of yours! It strikes a sensitive chord in one's mind because we have all been coaxed by that naughty voice in our minds at some stage. However, the poem is also a subtle warning about the consiquences of following the dark path and puts the reader back in the right place!

It reminds me of 'Gollum' from 'Lord of the Rings' and how he was corrupted by the ring and was no longer himself.
My favorite line was:
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Because it combines two polar-different aspects of emotion and in a way said (to me, at least) that the exact opposites are often one and the same. Like the saying 'opposites attract', I guess.

~Starry

That was very good. Very dark me likes

Que me gusta! This was very good, your command of the language is wonderful.

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whoa. that made me think. VERY GOOD ^^!

ME LIKE!

I liked this, temptation into darkness which is a them I enjoy and you did it really well.

hmm...
it's different. that's a good thing. it's not your basic oh, "boo-hoo" dark peom. i like it. ^_^

Ooo..fun, you often see the phrase, cloaked in lies or whatever, but nice description ^_^

Well done. This poem really gets deep into meaning and I love that about a writer, good job here. Keep up the mysterious writting in poems, it really draws a reader into it
Lost Shadow

I loved it! Dark, but well written and thought provoking.

Hey, cool poem! Very true, as well.
Arae