  esther 2003-04-21 . chapter 1 r u serious?!?!?!?! poor u! btw, i've never seen that scar but w/e |
| Kye 2002-12-05 . chapter 1 sorry for the HA! before, but it was funny. sad and tragic as it might be it was funny. Thanks for the entertainment |
| La Sotte du Village (too lazy to login) 2002-10-02 . chapter 1 interesting story... but i'm not very surprised... XP |
| Kye 2002-07-27 . chapter 1 HA! |
  EvenstarFairy 2002-06-12 . chapter 1sry, i know it must've killed at da time, but da way u described the incident made it seem funny. i wuz laughing, but i do pity u. tat must;ve hurt so bad!!! |
| firenze 2002-06-07 . chapter 1 ooo. drats. i mean, ummmmm, interesting story. i never noticed tat u had a scar. sounds like something kevin would do when he's four ...... |
 Eugenides 2002-06-07 . chapter 1lol! dats a gr8 story. u shud try ritin humorous short stories. i liked that final touch: "until i wuz five." i hav a birthmark that... ok... nevermind. gr8 story. o wait. i already said that. ok. 4 get it. keep on ritin! |
 AmandaPanda 2002-06-07 . chapter 1very interesting |
| Charlene 2002-06-07 . chapter 1 haha that was so cute!! Poor you! I remember in preschool, when we had the naps, the teachers gave us specific directions on how to sleep. They have so many bad stories, like how this girl died because she suffocated in her sleeping bag, and when they found her, her whole face was cold. I will never forget that. I miss taking naps in school!! Our elementary schools never have it!!
Well, I never even realized you had a scar
And you shouldn't have cursed in the last line either!
nice moral!!!!:) |
| Hi :D 2002-06-07 . chapter 1 wow such a touching story |
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