That's very good. I like that it is short, as you convey so much in so few words. Great job!

I love your writing. Please continue to write.

I'm not really in the mood to write good reviews right now so just basically letting you know I read it! Keep writing! _ JMBunny

::tugs at her chin:: Hmmm, interesting.

That is kewl, Madd Spammer! ! ! ! ! ! Thanx for reviewing a lot of my stories, I appreciate it! I posted a couple a new ones...

Reminds me of an old enemy of mine, we go back a long way. You have such a way of saying things (and of walking in my shoes, believe it or not). I love that...I'll be looking for more.

Um, I feel the same way, (except of course the last line) Anyways, this is a great short poem, it is something that should be thought of when looking at someone you care for... (Strangely, (not to actually advertise or anything) but I had just written something like this down, and I had typed it, and saved it under the same name as yours under original story, and I express the same feelings...) Anyways, this is a great poem, very vivid in what is really so little of being there in anything, it makes it so the reader can imagine things that you have that are not put into words.