I love this song more than anything, and your poem goes beautifully with it. :) I was worried at first that it might be some kind of rip-off of the lyrics. I'm sorry I even thought that--it's a great poem.

Wow. I really liked it

It's pretty good!

I liked that very much, so much truth to it. I, like a lot of the others, have not heard the song, but I loved what you created. Great talent, sweetheart. (God, I can be so inarticulate at times, I hope you get my point, which is I love your work) You're on my favorite authors list, if you didn't already know. (and there aren't many up there.)

The original was one of my favotite songs when I was in jr. high. I really like your version, it's just as good, if not better than the original! You are really talented!

Very well written, the end tied it together very nicely eh. Love the metaphors and imagry, well put together and thought out. Keep writting. :>.

CANADA RULES YEA !!!!!!!!!!

(especially Toronto)

this is very good! if you continue writing like this, you'll be the favorite author of lots of people here, not only of me... I haven't heard the song you mentioned, but the poem is beautiful.

i like this alot

Really good, i have never heard the song before, but i really like what you have done here.

Very profound. I'm not sure that I can understand it, but I like it. If I had more room, it would go in my favorites list.

Thanks For Reviewing Crawling,
Dark Chaos

This is really good. Please keep writing :)