|Reviews for The Baby|
| Candibat 6/7/02 . chapter 1
This is really good! I think the part where you're talking about the baby should be a little more clear though. Are they dead during the picnic? Or are they seeing the future? I love the idea, though!
| Masterful Thinker 6/7/02 . chapter 1
so short! And such little plot! Good idea though, nice concept