wow.. such a... non-violent story... and these pplz r such pacifists... *coughs* *coughs* *chokes* anywayz awesome story man... interesting military info.. *feels stupid* hehehe write more dude.. :)

wow, this was a really gud spy story. it sort of reminded me of the Jack Ryan movie "Clear and Present Danger." its probably just b/c im really stupid, but i thought that u used a bit 2 much military jargon. in any case, i liked it very much in general. the surprise ending came so unexpectedly. it also makes sense y u didn't characterize iven/henry that much. i wuz sort of confused by the epilogue. did they think they caught jalend or did they really catch him? i wud've liked it if he got away w/ it. gr8 story. keep ^ the gud ritin!

yea, chris is at my house rite now. COOOOOOL story!!! it's really good. the plot was ok, but the details were fascinating! well done.