ur poems are so... strong... i dunno if thats the way u really feel but if it is then... wow... u really need to... calm down? i guess.. lol ur much more emotional than i would have guessed

-caryl-

dont worry, u can change. it takes time and constant reminders, but u CAN change... keep remindin urself of wat u wanna b like until it comes to u automatically.. then u have changed :)

well that explains a lot. lol! sry, haven't review a lot of ur stuff recently. um... letc. ur poem was good in that it opened ^ a lot of things to ponder about, but it didn't really go anywhere ur other poems haven't gone. there are some cliches: "My anger is bottled inside" and the resovoir metaphor. i liked how u ended in a question, which is consistent with the whole angsty attitude of the poem. the only big problem i had w/ this poem is that it's sort of self-centered. u say that ur mad b/c of ur parents. big deal. every1 has that problem. and compared to other issues in life this poem is more like a superfluous complaint. but in general, i think it worked and i enjoyed reading it. keep riting! o and this poem mite b a bit confusing for ppl who dont kno u.

cool poem...i think all we need here is a lil anger management and a good therapist :P

chris sez that she agrees wit amandapanda. anger management. me? good poem........ don't keep u're anger inside, or bottle it ........ i think i would be pretty scared to see kevin on a rampage .........

anger management, kevin, anger management...writing in journals, punching pillows...that sorta stuff...good poem!
thanks for reviewing! actually, that would be pretty funny if ben was james! *evil grin*