Voltora, this is heartbreaking. Absolutely heartbreaking... and sadly the case for many. (I had similar problems with my own relationship with PersonInQuestion.)

The details were so much better than just vague angst and really let us get close to the girl... and... and... excuse me while I go sniffle a bit, 'kay? You did lovely work here, and the freeserve hummed in the unification of the lines.

Sincerely,

Jobey

Hiya i dunno if my last one worked but i know u, u know me. that was great and u looked great. Never admit defeat, i think ure stronger than that.

Wow. At first I thought you were talking about a crush.. then when you said at dinner i was kinda confused but then realizing you were talking about your dad, it gives it a wonderful kind of twist. Sad theme, But I love it! If you can could you review my newest poem 'Candles'?Thanks. ^_^ Great Job!!