Put shortly, you are brilliant.

Once again, well-done. Your storytelling abilities are amazing. The descriptions are beautifully written, as are the characters. I look forward to reading more!

(BTW, thank-you kindly for your reviews. It means a lot to know someone is actually reading the stories. ^^)

Tiff

This is the most beautiful story. At first it was unclear where and when it was taking place, but I understood once you got to the scene where Ava is looking in the mirror. It's obvious you're well-informed with what you're writing about, and you have a wonderful flow and style to your writing. And thanks for reviewing my story. :)

i only have time to read one today so i read one. this is realllllllllyyyyy good so far. i hope you continue it. I like all the details espescially. It created a very vivid image. :)

I loved this, it made me cry!