Great story overall please update soon and R&R my story

Whose voice did she hear at the theatre? What is going on inside her head? GAH! There are too many questions! Please Update son. Dis be a very very very very good story.

Wow this is wonderful I quite like your writing styel.

Ack! So little literature written! NO! I WANT MORE Della. I even updated that vampire story of mine for you! Not enough here to satisfy my cravings for Rising Mind!
MORE! :)

WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING, NOT WRITING ANY MORE LIKE THAT?!?! That is WRONG! That should be ILLEGAL!! I read all of that to find out youy dont' have an ending?!?!

OOh, now it gets exciting! (p.s. "forwards" isn't a word. Use "forward")

Action sequence at the end very gripping. Dialogue toward the middle a little confusing.

Not SO confusing. I like. Shorter reviews from now on, I promise.

Very interesting! I especially love the Old City. Intriguing, indeed. Still a couple of typos in this chapter. Actually, just one, but "a couple" sounds better, don't you think? :) I love coming into novel/stories late. Don't have to wait in agony for updates. Perhaps I'll get around to reading the next chapter tonight! Whoo-hoo! No homework!

I finally overcame my fear and tackled the big scary epic! Go me! I like it, so far. A few technical errors scattered about, however. I'll read the next chapter later.

Interesting note...

Awesome twist Della. can't wait to see what happens next!

OOh, keep writing.

much nift, though I had read it far before you had posted it. besides, I'm listening to Hohoemi no Budokan from YYHakusho, so I _can't_ be in a bad mood!

I tried to review before but the ** connection kept timing out or something really f**king stupid like that. Anyway, AWESOME CHAPTER girl! You know i live for your Rising Mind updates?