Finally got back to this marvelous story. ^o^ Long time no read, but I'm faithful, no? ^o^

Your development and description are getting better and better; characters like Roen are beginning to change in terms of function and form, gradually and subtly as well. And the way you portrayed the battles and action scenes - very good. You're not *just* a shoujo writer, as you claim: on the contrary, you're very well-rounded. Very nice! The mix of fantasy and tinges of mid- and high-tech elements make this a very unique blend of...well, lots of things!

I'd really want to stick around and read more, but my Physics tutorial applet finished downloading, so I'm out of excuses to stay online. I'll be back~!

~Aki~

P.S: I saw the original art site, and wow, were your drawings good! You're a great artist: you should seriously consider becoming a mangaka someday. Think about it...^o^ (squeals) Dustin is so bishie~! (glomps Dustin)

chapt. 13 was great. the idea that you went back and explain why the angel and demon were fighting was a good idea. i was confuse at first why they fought and why it has to do with roen and his buds. i know whats GOING ON NOW. thanks...great story...
go Dustin...
i know he's not in the story as much as Ara, Roen and Triston, BUT I LIKE HIM THE BEST.
they are so cute.
oh... please update your other story. the one thats called WITH THESE SMALL HANDS...
i think you know what i'm talking about, right?
i like that story vewy much too...
UPDATE!

this story is turning out really good. i love the characters, especially Dustin. i really think he should get together with Ara, but i know where this is getting at. your characters are well develop. there are great conversations in the story that i can't find in many of the stories i've read in fictionpress.
PS: GO Dustin... go get your girl. Roen doesn't deserve her...

this chapter was fun to read. What happen to ROen!. i like him. Go roen. do make him look bad...

Hey, the story is pretty good so far. i like the fortiune telling it your stories. same from "with these small hands. it was fun. great characters development.

Hm...background info on Miyori's past, yes...now I feel sorry for her too, living under her mother's love but Reia's relative hostility...poor Miyori. And her mother too...what they did to her was terrible...
Quite a sad chapter, but nonetheless nicely done. ^o^
~Aki~

Well, Hikari knows Trenton too eh? I was thinking she'd be more than a coincidental acquaintance when you mentioned the orphanage, but I wasn't too sure...
I'm glad to see Roen's fine, though. ^o^
Wow, you seem to be getting more and more profound with every chapter. The lines of thought at the end...beautiful. "People don't change...they just stop acting." Totally true...I'll remember that from now on.
About the story? Well, it's getting better and better... ^o^
~Aki~

Great formatting, separating Ara's thoughts from Roen's (grins) Your description of the void was brief, but vivid...nicely done.
Now that we know Ara's all right, I wonder what happens to Roen...?
~Aki~

I'm back! (cackles, lightning and thunder on cue in background)
Eh heh...kidding aside...wow, so much action in just one chapter! It looks like Mayuko and Miyori have shed the sheepskins, haven't they? The transition from meek schoolgirl to surreal angel was done very nicely, well done.
And wow, I sure feel sorry for Trenton...apparently so does Mayuko, whose pain goes to him. Does she love him as she seems to, or leech off him? Or both...?
Off to read more...I am still so in awe of this fantastic chapter. ^o^
~Aki~

Ehh...that dream was freaky O.O but nicely done for the mood. Miyori's kissing Ara was DEFINITELY unexpected, but then again you never cease to surprise me with this story. ^o^
What did Miyori do to Trenton?! (cries) Cliffhanger~sorry, gotta get off the net, but...this is really good! ^o^ I can't believe you were telling me otherwise!
I'll check back really soon. Ja!
~Aki~
P.S: Does Kelly have a minor crush on Dustin? ^o^ Just asking!
(disappears)

Ara has no idea how Dustin feels about her, huh? (grins) I kind of feel sorry for Dustin, but then what can he do, right?
Wow...Miyori's sudden change in attitude really caught me by surprise...although maybe her innocent get-up was nothing but, ne?
Off to read more~!
~Aki~

Hey, it's Aki ^o^ Well I took Steph's word and started reading Fallen Angels (although I should really be studying for my exams, lol)
Excellent introductory piece, the cryptic words of a doubted but probably truthful fortune-teller. Ara getting spooked out was understandable, I mean who wouldn't be? Dustin likes Ara, eh? Then I suppose it's hard for him to egg her on and spill her emotions to Roen while he's bottling his own feelings inside...what a nice guy. ^o^
Trenton and Mayuko's exchanges are sweetly funny...but is Mayuko more than she appears? It seems so...given how she and Miyori seem to be..."connected" I figure the fantasy part of this story has already begun, and marvelously at that.
Good idea, to let things simmer down for a while after Ara's predicted fortune. Other stories jump straight to the conflict, but you put it off for a while, and the characterization you pulled through was definitely worth the wait.
My eyes were glued to the screen during the whole concert chapter, and I almost wanted to scream at Miyori for getting Roen late. ^o^ But then again, she's so innocent so I can't blame her. On teh other hand, Roen did make it...nice song by the way. Did you write that yourself? ^o^ If you did, then it was very well done.
I take back what I said about Miyori being too innocent. She seems to be a very interesting character after all...the way she kissed Roen so suddenly made my eyes huge. Mayuko is an angel...and Miyori...a fallen one? (making guesses here)
Both Mayuko and Miyori don't seem to live up to their first impressions, lol. ^o^ In any event, that fact makes this story much more interesting: never judge a book by its cover. ^o^
I'd read more, as Trenton summoning Roen to "look at" something was a definite cliffhanger, but my mom's telling me to get off the net. I'll check back soon, promise. ^o^
Overall? Great work, wonderful storytelling and excellent grasp of the characterization. My faves as of now would probably be Ara and Roen. Strange, though...the fortune-teller said Ara would find unhappiness; why is Roen in the middle of it all? Well, I guess I'll have to read on to find out.
Your plot is wonderful, your grammar and structure apparently flawless. Once again, good job and kudos for your work. My hat comes off to you. ^o^
Ja!
~Aki~

(this is josh again)

i didn't read this one (cuz you told me not to), but you are really well loved on this thing, i can tell. this one has 200+ reviews! WOW! I'm gonna try to beat that.

*sob* That was so wonderfully sad! My first time reviewing since I discovered this late (ehem) and I read this STRAIGHT! *laughs maniacally while pulling hair* My eyes hurt like hell coz I stayed up all night! Now I'm off to your book 2. Ja~

This story is really good...but WHY SO LONG?!...I'll continue reading this one laterz okay? Whoa...29 chapters...and I'm only on chapter 3...I'll take a break from reading this fic and read your other ones okay?...*really long silence*