Although meant to be funny (I think) it was really written beautifuly. Very descriptive.

very good. I like the ending. I shall be more careful whenever i consume pizza in the future

Though that was aimed to be funny, that was actually quite beautifully written. *grins* And I don't even like pizza! My favorite lines were this:

"Slowly pull the slice away

From all its gooey friends". ^_^ Great poem, M'cha.

very cute.

ROFL that was really adorable and good!

Hehe! This is really good (and very true). Alas that I had known before I ate it! And now, the caffine is signing off

*drools on keyboard*
*looks at it and pulls a face*
*wipes it up and gets some food*

hehe, fun stuff, pizza. hmmm, i think there should be a 1001 things to do with pizza somewhere... i should do that... hehe, if you check up on me, i might have that up... thanx for an inspiration. another story to add to my big list of unfinshed stuffs. okies, this is a reivew, so im gunna reivew! yeah, pizza, i like pizza, i like plain old cheese pizza better than pepperonis, or else pulling the pepperonis off, eating the pizza, playing with the pepperonis, then eating them... okies, i have to stop going off subject! **chants: review! review! review!** okies, i like the poem! yay! i did it! i thought it was really cool and amusing. how did ur teacher like it if it was a project thingy. my teachers tend to not like things that include humor so im screwed... but, I liked it!

::drools:: pizza......

meara you FREAK!!!!!!!!
why on earth would you write that?!?!?!?!?!
email me!!
dragonwing5

Mmmm...piiizzzaaaa....
Great poem. Write more (not more about pizza, but more originals and fanfics and I'll just shut up cuz i'm making no sense, am I?) I have to compliment you, once more, on your vocabulary. Wonderful.

Teri

hmmmm... can't we get free pizza when we read this poem? good poem- you're a good poet!

Hey! Good poem! It made me want to have some pepperoni pizza and I don't even like pepperoni pizza!

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This is a good poem. But i don't like peperoine i'm a vegetarian. But good poem anyway.

Angel Of The Storms

This is really cool. What made you decide to write a poem about pizza? Lol. I just updated Siver Wolf. Okay- I have to go get some coffee.
-Shadow