|Reviews for Star Child|
| cutie 7/18/08 . chapter 25
| Kamiko-Miha 7/12/08 . chapter 1
Jejeje, I still can't believe you put a translation for the word "Si" I thought everyone knew what that meant(supongo que algunas personas no saben lo que quiere decir esa palabra...). I like this story so far; this chapter wasn't too eventful, but it is the first chapter and those usual involve a lot of character introduction. The character profiles were rather amusing though. Especially Chico's bad habit(XD).
| Ra 7/8/08 . chapter 24
Just wondering if you were ever planning on finishing this :) This remains as one of my favorite fictionpress stories, even after so many years!
| randomevents 5/31/07 . chapter 24
Shit! Sorry for the language, but it's not FINISHED YET! Argh, I am so so ready to know the ending. The whole story line is cool and I WANT to KNOW the ENDING. Hehe. Sorry if I'm being a bit overboard but I feel really let down right now because I didn't get to read the ending. I've been reading this story straight since 2:00 and I feel like someone who's been watching all the episodes of Samurai Champloo and then find it have abruptly cut off just as I was getting to the good part.
DOn't take this the wrong way. I'm actually complimenting you because I'm feeling crazy right now not being able to read the whole story.
As for your grammar and spelling, you've got lots of mistakes but they don't detract from the overall charm of the story. I rally like the character you made of Chico and Aiko. Hehe. I think his name is funny because here in the Philippines, there's a fruit called Chico with the exact same spelling.
You just need to take away those grammar and spelling mistakes because they tend to distract a person when she's reading, well, me anyways. You spelled "loser" as "looser" and you did some other stuff wrong too. If you want, I'll do an overview and write you where you went wrong.
Btw, you're in my favorite authors list. Hehe. Kudos.
| yaoi-gal1 4/5/07 . chapter 24
Hum, so am I seeing something that I shouldn't or what? Why do I get the idea that Renzo wants to stay in ENICO for good. That would be awesome! I don't like the girl so who cares! Maybe I'm starting to read you-but I think it will happen, right? RIGHT? Hope so...
I'm happy about Mieko and Yoshi-they're so cute!
| Abstruse Blue 4/3/07 . chapter 24
Wow, I stayed up real late reading this because it is SO good, of course I had finished these last two chapters in the morning. haha. I LOVE IT SO MUCH! Though I have one question:
Whatever happened to that blond guy aka Renzo's stalker? xD
I liked him.
| Half-BloodGrlPirate 2/28/07 . chapter 23
please please please update soon i love this story it is so sweet and romantic and so many problems are happening that it is so suspenceful and awesome i love it seriously please update
| yaoi-gal1 9/27/06 . chapter 23
FINALLY! But...you are cruel, you will always be cruel-chan. Let Aiko and Chico love! Love love love!
| me 8/21/06 . chapter 22
I love it when he says he is a clone-it's so cute! keep it up!
| Lady Psychic 8/17/06 . chapter 22
Clones, eh? Hahaha, Chico has got an imagination. I hope Aiko will find a way to express his love. Anyways, good chapter!
| Peri 8/9/06 . chapter 22
Hey! I just started reading your story and got hooked! I love the characters and now I can't wait for next chapter!
I'm cheering for Aiko! I am cheering for Yoshi! Go Yoshi! Did I mention I love Aiko and Yoshi? D Update soon!
| yaoi-gal 8/6/06 . chapter 22
Now, I'm upset! What on hell is Aiko doing? I am so beating him too!
KISS CHICO! AND FUCK HIM ALREADY! That is what he really wants Aiko, don't kid yourself.
| yaoi-gal 8/6/06 . chapter 21
Long time! I almost forgot about this story, but I read back some chapters and got back on track. Now, what is Chico? Would this turn into a sci-fi story? Why do I have that feeling? lolAnyway, good work!
| Lady Psychic 7/17/06 . chapter 21
Yay! You updated! I was pleasantly surprised! Don't worry, many people (including myself) have a tendancy to get behind (or have writter's block)on our stories so you're not alone. Anyways, this chapter is pretty good. Yeah, Aiko seems more docile but I think it's an improvement (IMO). This chapter has yet more hints that Chico could be related to Renzo and Hoshiko. Could he really be related to them or is it just a coincidence? I guess I'll have to wait to find out. Hopefully, we won't have to wait too long if you've started on the next chapter. Anyways, keep up the good work!
| Lady Psychic 6/6/06 . chapter 20
This is a really good story. It has an interesting plot, and I just couldn't stop reading. I love Chico and Aiko. I really like Meiko. I have mixed feelings about Yoshi (sometimes I like him, but there are a lot of times in which I want to knock some sence into him). I don't really like Tannaka (because she's too mean to Chico), but do kind of see why she acts like she does. I didn't like Renzo at first, but I've grown to like him as the story progressed. Anyway, there are quite a few grammar errors in this story, but despite that, I still love this story. I hope you will eventually update this because I would like to know what happens next.