exellent start! Write more, you also need to right more of the Rending Dark to.

wow omg that was so good, write more soon i luv the way that its so mysterious. please keep going.

She's pretty evil.

Wow. I've not seen something this good in origanals in AGES. My task for today is to look up that Latin in the little book I've got. Wonderful begining.
PS.Have you read the book, A Break with Charity? If you havn't, you should. It's really good, and might help you with this story. Keep up the good work!

YAy. More fantasy from Minka. But hey, I need more Rendng Dark and more of this so now you have double the work load. Good stuff. I have more to post up but fanFiction has decided that my Login page has become temporarily unavailable and that really sucks **. Good stuff and keep it up. Or else.