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| Duuude 2008-06-28 ch 1, | abuseomgsh. Awesome story. I've always loved stories where it leads up to them finally making the moves on each other. =) It's so amazing! I love Dan! He's such a cool main character. He's just so nonchalant about everything. Man, I'd love to meet someone like him on summer vacation... if you know what I mean. heheheh. anyway, this is definitely going into my favourites. It's really cute. And I always thought Dan would be the one to initiate things, I don't know why I just assumed. Matt surprised me. . . =] Lovely story. |
| jaybriel 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseDude, can I just say wow. This is a review I guess for all the installments of Danny and Matt's story and I guess I'm just floored that you've managed to create such an amazingly sweet story that is well written and can sustain itself without becoming cloying. There's angst, though I felt that the whole cutting issue was a little out of keeping with the whole feel of their story - it didn't help that it was skipped over pretty quickly for such a major issue, which did nothing to ease its presence in the story. But there are ups and downs in every relationship and I think overall it came out well. I liked the way you handled the long distance relationship, and I actually think the whole virginity thing, while kind of unusual, worked for those two. I guess they're just special, and lucky to have found someone with whom they are so comfortable that they can leave sex on the sidelines for so long without the fear of not having it damaging what they do have. I guess it just proves that their relationship is so much more than all that, and I think that that's what makes a story that sweet and fluffy work just as powerfully as some of the heavier stuff on this site. Thank you for writing them ^-^ |
| PindrakeCake 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseRead this story a while back. Loved it to no end, don't know if I commented. |
| gummybaby 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abusethat was made up of 100% sweetness, really great story...if only real life could be that sweet... |
| wandless 2007-10-26 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! Really sweet. The last line made me think of High School Musical, haha. Keep writing! You're very talented at it. |
| AmorphousHeart 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this story. The tension between the two boys was just so adorable. And made their kiss mean so much more. Great job! |
| it's that time of day again... 2007-08-05 ch 1, anon. | abusethis...is...so...well...written! and cute! the characters feel very realistic, and their personalities are very likable. it sounds as if this could have really happened to two boys who thought they were straight. thx so much for writing this fic! you rock! :D |
| i-see-faeries 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseAw, how cute. ^^ They're both very lovable characters. And it was fun reading how their relationship slowly grew. Much more real that way. I love it. |
| Kidiu Anaji 2007-06-28 ch 1, | abuseOh, so fluffy! Really cute! So cute! Aww, an innocent relationship! Yeah, okay. I don't have too much too say, except that I really liked reading this! Yay! |
| Wolf bathed in Star-light 2007-03-30 ch 1, | abuseum, this is really cute and i really like it! 2 things: 1. i think the rating should be 'T' i know it's not that explicit or anything, just judging from the content of others stories i've read and their ratings, i'd place it as a 'T' 2. Um, i think it's a littl unrealisitc how honest they'd be with each other, but apart from that i really love this story! it's adorable, and well done. and you can tell you either do those things yourself (riverdancing and boating etc) or you've researched them. :D |
| bansira 2007-03-06 ch 1, | abuseOh my...! This is the cutest thing ever xD; |
| Cokii 2006-12-22 ch 1, | abuseaw i think i cried at the end that was so sweet if you continued it or made a sequel i would love you forever! j/k thank you for writing this! :D |
| Inherent 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abuseThis story was so cute! I'm so glad I decided to read it. |
| Back of Beyond 2006-11-23 ch 1, | abuseamazing story, i loved it ^^ |
| Drew 2006-10-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww I like it, The pennies bit was cute :d |