good.Keep writing!!

I like the second to last stanza the best. Very clever rhyme. It's good that you are expressing an emotion that you try to hide.

nifty poem... can see what you mean- she is annoying... very nice.

pleasant. you're such a nice person heather. but that's why we love you, i suppose. wait, look who's talking? im the undisputed queen of evil, i think...*ponders on that note for a while* anyway, HAHAHAA! that is so true! we all feel like that about her, even if thats such a horrible thing to say. hey, i was gonna read that story you asked me a while ago to read but now i actually have the time, but what was it called...? *shuffles feet dejectedly* i have crappy short term memory, ok? but anyway, i hate you for pairing all the fin yaoi things in YGO. Marikou & yami?!?! SETO AND YAMI!?!??!?!! honestly. SETO WOULD KILL YAMI FIRST! JONOUCHI & MARIKOU!?!? and i cant believe you would want your beloved bakky with yami. i hope he deserts you. and comes to ME! you evil yaoi person. phooey to you too. and your bio REALLY bothers me. *grumbles* too bloody neat and pretty and creepy yaoiness...trunks is cool. *smirks* best charrie in my opinion. but at least you dont like the pairing of bakura w/ malik. i would have flamed you for that. anyway, more praise. good rhyming scheme, and considering it conveys my feelings of her greatly, i really like it. im so mean!! excellent...well, i must be dispersing now, but tell me what that other thing was that you sent emails about to me and other ppl...yeah, i have limited vocabulary at the moment...well, tchau. *grins and then falls asleep at keyboard* z...
-HoST
what? a reviewer called me that and i like...z...

hey......sounds like someone I know!! I shudder at the similarities...this poem describes her -exactly-......scary, huh?
Anywayz, this was really cool!!! Especially since it sounds like the aforementioned girl......whom I hate with all my soul...........~evil cackle~

i liked your peom cause it reminded me of my feelings towards someome i go to school with... the person you talk abt sounds a lot like her too, oh well tho.

Wow it is so much like how me and chez feel for mat evans in our school. You know we had a group of us once and we all told him to go away and leave us alone and look it is 3 months later of us all doing this and look *points at him* HE'S STILL THERE!!!!!!!

PS. Good poem *thumbs up*

Down boy down! I know how you feel, but we should at least try to be nice to her. Love her as she needs us to. I read this thing in a YouthWalk mag, and although I know you're not Christian, I'll post it here and hope someone will read it (this is a shorther version than the published one):

A youth group was playing a game one night. They were drawing pictures and posting them on a dart board, then throwing darts at them. After nearly everyone in the class had had a turn, the youth leader told them to stop. He removed the pictures from the foam dart board, then he took the board off of the wall. Underneath it all was a ripped and torn picture of Jesus. The mangled picture showed him with holes and jagged marks covering his face. All the leader said was, "In as much as you have done it unto the least of these my brethen, you have done it unto me." No other words were necessary.

I know it's hard Heather-chan, and whoever else is reading this. But it's what God calls us to do, and I have every intention of trying harder this year.

Casia: Your poetry is good, but have you ever thought of talking to that girl about why she seems so blue? Maybe there's a reason she's trying to act perfect.

Angel: You might not think she hears what you say behind her back, but there's a 99.8% chance that she can. Believe me, I know. I get teased all the time, moreso when I was younger and really insecure. They thought I didn't hear them when I hid behind my books or under my hate or spent my recesses on the swings. But they were dead wrong.

Kit: It really hurts, you know, for one thing to be the subject of one's misery. Really, that girl should lighten up and realize how miserable she's making everyone else. But you know, a little kindness can go a long way. "But I HAVE tried being kind!" you'll say. Well, maybe you should try harder. Miracles don't happen just like that. They take time... effort... and patience.

Casia: I'm sure this isn't what you wanted to hear, and you'll probably hate us too from now on...

Angel: But...

Kit: It's our duty as Christians...

Casia: To make the world...

Angel: A better place...

Kit: For everyone.

Casia: Just try. Bad times always come to an end. You can tell her that. The field of your vision is so small. Even when you think you can see everything, you can't. Try a new perspective.

Angel: We'll be praying for you.

Kit: Ditto.

::Waves:: Hi Heather!!! I love it! You're soooooooo right about you-know-who, even if I don't know her.

This was really well written. However I know how you're talking about. She's not that bad if you just get to know her. After all her brother's worse (and you know it!) I'm not flaming, because this was really well written (I like how you made it ryhme (sp?)) And it's a good topic, but still, she's not that bad (you'd be really annoying to if you only had one friend, and even they wanted to rip your head off sometimes1). Well, i've about lectured out. Great poem (poems are really good places to vent in aren't they?)

I like this because i have similar feelings for someone who made my life hell. Well written

hey! nice one! i can feel whatever you're saying. got this classmate of mine...same thing...same story..wish i can write poetry too. lucky you. this is great!good job! if you wanna mail me, mysterious_rockstar@yahoo.com

I can tell you really belive what your saying, and I dont want to sound like some self rightious person, or a christian or a follower of any religion, but dont let your heart be bound by this hate, sometimes you have to just let the world flow for better or worse, this girl you speak of from my perspective feels very alone, maybe she speaks of her mother because she has no one else to tell and she just wants to scream but the words wont come, just like you, she's pushing off what you say as a joke, she wants you to think that, because its less embaressing to laugh then it is to cry, no you dont have to be friends, but you dont have to be enemies, and you dont have to be friends, just help her, and forgive her for all she has done, later