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Reviews For: By the Poolside

butterflye
2003-06-23
ch 3,
abuseinterestingly niftyness... OO...when are you going to update?
Mystified
2003-06-17
ch 1,
abuse*Shivers* Creepy! I shall NEVER go swimming again! I'm hesitant about reading the next two chapters, but I think you write excellently, so...onward! = )
PYRO
2003-04-19
ch 3, anon.
abuseO
I love your story!
its so kewl!!
I would be scared **-less if he came to my house...wel...as long as hes hott i dont really care!! ^_^
Annoying_brat
2003-03-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseI like, like like like. Write more, PLEASE. I like your monster, villan...creature...thingy. He reminds me of a picture i drew once, of a kickass freaky looking fish man thingy...i think i called it...umhh...(insert cool name hear)...okay i just called it fish man, but still!
kitty16
2003-02-27
ch 2,
abuseyo! this is friggin awsome!

~kitty~
ToriJon
2002-12-22
ch 2, anon.
abuseThis story is way cool!!!
Sorry, I didn't feel like signing in (And yes, that's my pen name (ToriJon). I haven't written anything for the sight yet, but be on the look out).
Signed,
The Nebraskan Chick
AliceBowie
2002-10-24
ch 2,
abuseoooo!!!
this is so kewl!!!!
keep writing please
i wanna see whats he up to
and what shes gonna do about it
Shadie
2002-10-18
ch 2,
abuseThis is good! I like it! Can't come up with anything more to write... Keep the good work up!
No longer using this accoun...
2002-10-05
ch 2,
abuseThank you for reviewing my story and sorry for taking so long to return the favour.

Interesting story you have hear and I am left wondering what is really going on. What is this creature she finds in the pool and what does it wants. Although by the second chapter I am really confused as to what is going on.

Anyway, spelling and grammer is good and the decriptions given are a bit list like. Keep on writing.

Grim Writter
Malachi
2002-08-12
ch 1,
abuseHmmm...Not bad.

Give my pool story a look. It's called "Down Below."
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