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Reviews For: By the Poolside

butterflye 2003-06-23 ch 3,	abuseinterestingly niftyness... OO...when are you going to update?
Mystified 2003-06-17 ch 1,	abuseShivers Creepy! I shall NEVER go swimming again! I'm hesitant about reading the next two chapters, but I think you write excellently, so...onward! = )
PYRO 2003-04-19 ch 3, anon.	abuseO I love your story! its so kewl!! I would be scared **-less if he came to my house...wel...as long as hes hott i dont really care!! ^_^
Annoying_brat 2003-03-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like, like like like. Write more, PLEASE. I like your monster, villan...creature...thingy. He reminds me of a picture i drew once, of a kickass freaky looking fish man thingy...i think i called it...umhh...(insert cool name hear)...okay i just called it fish man, but still!
kitty16 2003-02-27 ch 2,	abuseyo! this is friggin awsome! ~kitty~
ToriJon 2002-12-22 ch 2, anon.	abuseThis story is way cool!!! Sorry, I didn't feel like signing in (And yes, that's my pen name (ToriJon). I haven't written anything for the sight yet, but be on the look out). Signed, The Nebraskan Chick
AliceBowie 2002-10-24 ch 2,	abuseoooo!!! this is so kewl!!!! keep writing please i wanna see whats he up to and what shes gonna do about it
Shadie 2002-10-18 ch 2,	abuseThis is good! I like it! Can't come up with anything more to write... Keep the good work up!
No longer using this accoun... 2002-10-05 ch 2,	abuseThank you for reviewing my story and sorry for taking so long to return the favour. Interesting story you have hear and I am left wondering what is really going on. What is this creature she finds in the pool and what does it wants. Although by the second chapter I am really confused as to what is going on. Anyway, spelling and grammer is good and the decriptions given are a bit list like. Keep on writing. Grim Writter
Malachi 2002-08-12 ch 1,	abuseHmmm...Not bad. Give my pool story a look. It's called "Down Below."

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