interestingly niftyness... OO...when are you going to update?

*Shivers* Creepy! I shall NEVER go swimming again! I'm hesitant about reading the next two chapters, but I think you write excellently, so...onward! = )

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I love your story!
its so kewl!!
I would be scared **-less if he came to my house...wel...as long as hes hott i dont really care!! ^_^

I like, like like like. Write more, PLEASE. I like your monster, villan...creature...thingy. He reminds me of a picture i drew once, of a kickass freaky looking fish man thingy...i think i called it...umhh...(insert cool name hear)...okay i just called it fish man, but still!

yo! this is friggin awsome!

~kitty~

This story is way cool!!!
Sorry, I didn't feel like signing in (And yes, that's my pen name (ToriJon). I haven't written anything for the sight yet, but be on the look out).
Signed,
The Nebraskan Chick

oooo!!!
this is so kewl!!!!
keep writing please
i wanna see whats he up to
and what shes gonna do about it

This is good! I like it! Can't come up with anything more to write... Keep the good work up!

Thank you for reviewing my story and sorry for taking so long to return the favour.

Interesting story you have hear and I am left wondering what is really going on. What is this creature she finds in the pool and what does it wants. Although by the second chapter I am really confused as to what is going on.

Anyway, spelling and grammer is good and the decriptions given are a bit list like. Keep on writing.

Grim Writter

Hmmm...Not bad.

Give my pool story a look. It's called "Down Below."