 butterflye 2003-06-23 . chapter 3interestingly niftyness... OO...when are you going to update? |
 Mystified 2003-06-17 . chapter 1*Shivers* Creepy! I shall NEVER go swimming again! I'm hesitant about reading the next two chapters, but I think you write excellently, so...onward! = ) |
 PYRO 2003-04-19 . chapter 3 O
I love your story!
its so kewl!!
I would be scared **-less if he came to my house...wel...as long as hes hott i dont really care!! ^_^ |
 Annoying_brat 2003-03-26 . chapter 1 I like, like like like. Write more, PLEASE. I like your monster, villan...creature...thingy. He reminds me of a picture i drew once, of a kickass freaky looking fish man thingy...i think i called it...umhh...(insert cool name hear)...okay i just called it fish man, but still! |
 Winter Evoleht 2003-02-27 . chapter 2yo! this is friggin awsome!
~kitty~ |
 ToriJon 2002-12-22 . chapter 2 This story is way cool!!!
Sorry, I didn't feel like signing in (And yes, that's my pen name (ToriJon). I haven't written anything for the sight yet, but be on the look out).
Signed,
The Nebraskan Chick |
 AliceBowie 2002-10-24 . chapter 2oooo!!!
this is so kewl!!!!
keep writing please
i wanna see whats he up to
and what shes gonna do about it |
 Shadie 2002-10-18 . chapter 2This is good! I like it! Can't come up with anything more to write... Keep the good work up! |
 No longer using this account 2002-10-05 . chapter 2Thank you for reviewing my story and sorry for taking so long to return the favour.
Interesting story you have hear and I am left wondering what is really going on. What is this creature she finds in the pool and what does it wants. Although by the second chapter I am really confused as to what is going on.
Anyway, spelling and grammer is good and the decriptions given are a bit list like. Keep on writing.
Grim Writter |
 Malachi 2002-08-12 . chapter 1Hmmm...Not bad.
Give my pool story a look. It's called "Down Below." |