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| Kaleema 2004-03-27 ch 1,  | abuseNeat story, I enjoyed it. It is difficult sometimes to be able to introduce a world and characters and still be able to wrap the plot up in a small space; you do it well. Good job. |
| Spik3y 2002-09-09 ch 1, | abuseCool! I enjoyed this story! Nice twist at the end when Arifel tricks Tarkash. I hope you'll write more stories set in this world. Apologies for the other story--"Truth at Sight"! I didn't read the flashback bits clearly enough and didn't notice Alanna slipping off to sleep.! |
| Poison Tea 2002-08-13 ch 1, | abuse2004 words? Ughhhh. I didn't actually read it. I said I'd review all your stories. I never said I'd read them. |
| spudsy 2002-08-08 ch 1, | abusei agree, i will read your story which im sure is great when the formating is made into paragraphs and the speech is spaced out to make the whole story more understanding xx im sure its a kool stoy :+) |
| No longer using this accoun... 2002-07-14 ch 1, | abuseI am sorry but I took one look at this and just couldn't read it. The formating is a nightmare as that first block of text should be spilt into managable paragraphs and after someone is done talking I always start a new line. I don't mean to be harsh just that the stories format needs changing in my opinion. Grim Writter |