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| trash can art 2006-07-03 ch 1, | abuseMy friend and I were cruising around Fictionpress searching for ridiculously bad poetry to leave hopelessly sarcastic comments to... ...And we found yours! xD Haha, but don't get us wrong at all. We started reading and lost the need to leave anything hopeless OR sarcastic because your first and last stanzas were just so damn bloody brilliant, (All seriousness, mate.) as was the in-between. Toodles ^__^; |
| Frore 2006-03-31 ch 1, | abuseVery cool. =) Shame it's Friday... |
| Nacilme 2005-08-21 ch 1, | abuseTo put it short; I love it. |
| Quid 2004-09-19 ch 1, | abuseM Strawberry Sunday... But seriously that's really good. The little voices in my head are singing and they won't shut up! |
| Frogalog 2004-01-13 ch 1, | abusethis was a really great poem. it really has a lot of meaning to me. keep up the good work! |
| Banpaia Daisho 2003-10-16 ch 1, | abuseI like the not-so-common rhyme scheme here. The flow is good, but meter needs tweaking. |
| AidanMoon 2003-06-13 ch 1, | abuseThis a a really wondeful poem, I love the way you've written this. |
| An Insane Video Game Nerd 2003-06-08 ch 1, | abuseNice poem, hon. :-) I like it a lot. |
| Ayanlu 2002-08-18 ch 1, | abuseYou type sadness in your heart, yet it becomes brilliance on paper. |
| SweetGrape 2002-07-17 ch 1, | abusegives the effect of oddity; it's a beautiful day, but something's just nagging and it's not perfect. |
| saaio 2002-07-14 ch 1, | abuseooooo...I like this. keep it up! |