cara, i think it works, the end and all.

:'( That's..sad.

~TBH (unincorporated)

my dear god it's amazing.....very emotional and really brings u into that person's state of mind....where's the sequel dammit?

I love how the man/woman is overcome both by rage and by compassion. It makes me feel for the character. I want to see where this is going. Please continue the story?