whoa..
ur writing is amazing...
the contrast between these two main relationships is really striking, and the detail u put into everything makes it all seem so realistic
the subtle welling of the plot you weave is so... professional...
ur really a great writer, not just the main fluff i read (and do enjoy) on ff... including my own fluff... but i mean your writing style
it's like i'm watching something like momento - reading format. well..not momento... i can't think of the titles of the other movies i'm thinking of... the kinds that leave a lingering disturbing aftertaste ya know?
..*ahem*.. anyways.. great.. yeah

i'm seriously intrigued. i love your descriptive choice of words and sentences that create a really beautiful imagery. i don't want to guess at the plot already, but i love your characters already because i can almost already feel that aspect that makes them disturbing.
my email is bunnilang@hotmail.com, how often do you update?

Wow! *glomps*
Damn you Brent- you're so talented! I love this story...! It's so great! I love the way you put us really there with your characters.. You better finish this story though! ^_^ B-e-t-t-e-r!
*glomps again* VERY good!

Note from author:
This story is one of those that can't be judges until it is all over and done with. The story will come together as the chapters progress. In this light, if anyone would like to be updated when new chapters are put up, please put your e-mail address in a review and i'll e-mail you with story updates. Thanks.