This is such a sweet, promising poem... and it delivers with extra gifts included! I am in awe of you and this poem!

Ah, wonderful! I love your poetry!

Nice, I can totally relate to that feeling being the too shy girl that I am. I liked the idea that forever dreaming, death, will make you closer to an translucent lover. (It inspires me)

Your question about Rainbows- It means that anything beautiful in the world is fake: Pretty people are painted on and carved so carefully by the plastic surgeons that they buy, This North American world has everything and brainwash- That there can never be a pretty until we fix all the problems in this messed up place called life- Anything perfect is intangible- and vanished like the rainbow.

Hope that solves that- TO