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cbprice25
2008-05-27
ch 9,
abuseOh! Please post another chapter. I'd love to find out how this finishes!
rachely
2008-05-19
ch 9,
abuseYou really need to update soon! This is really good. :)
ebony
2008-03-20
ch 9, anon.
abusehey i just read ur story, it was really good! if u ended it here u could totally have another cupple of chapters! anyway good story
*Ebony
alemica
2008-03-01
ch 1,
abuseI liked the first chapter! I'm definitely going to read more later. I cannot wait :)
woodstock1969
2008-02-11
ch 9,
abuseI love your story! I'm actually crying out of sheer joy right now because things finally worked out. I know that a story is truly amazing when the plight of the characters can extract such strong emotion from me...especially when I'm supposed to be writing an English paper, lol.

I guess it sometimes takes a reminder of our own mortality to make us realize what's truly important and that we need to get past the stupid barriers to happiness that we put up. I mean, I've only had a brush with death once, and it was when I was ten and consequently had no idea what love was, but you know what I'm getting at.

I think the reason that I connect with Lynn so much is that I once suffered through a three and a half year-long unrequited love...thing with my best guy friend. It wasn't pretty. I told him after a year and a half, but things just sort of dragged on, me living in my own daydreams and him giving me the "dating could ruin our friendship" line the few times that I reminded him of my feelings. We were young and stupid, and I look back on those days and want to give the girl I was then a good, hard smack. I must have been a masochist or something to let things go on as they did for that long. I still have so many regrets about that relationship and also some pent-up resentment, though I'm trying to squash that. It's been nearly four years since things ended between us (I went to a private high school while he went to the public one), and I've only seen him a few times since then, all completely by accident. The last time was about two weeks ago. I hadn't talked to him in over a year prior to that meeting, and very few words were exchanged, mostly because of my coldness towards him. I've been thinking about this a lot lately (it doesn't exactly help that I have to drive by his house every morning to get to school), and a part of me feels like I should somehow reconcile things. I just don't know anymore...

Wow, sorry. I'm completely unloading my problems on you simply because your story reminded me of them. That was probably more about my life than you ever wanted to know. If you have any advice, I'd be glad to hear it, but feel free to completely scrap this as well. :-)

Anyway, great story.

~ woodstock1969
Evenstar1389
2008-02-08
ch 9,
abusenice i love this sweet story. I've long imagined when the girl gets into a death-like situation and the hero rescues her and realises his feelings for her...yeah im such a sap. Even though Josh didnt actually save her, it's close enough. I had thought corey was to be the third party but in the end he was just a new best friend, which is a good thing in a way because of less angst, and there was another way for Josh to reveal his feelings lol
Oooh.Look.A Cat
2008-02-05
ch 9,
abuse..ohkay that was weird
because i just read the previous chapter
and didn't even realise that this chapter was here
...oh wait no i get it now
i had read the previous chapter to catch up on what i missed
and then realised i never read that chapter so i read it, reviewed it (because obviously i had not read it) and then moved onto this on
all the while being confused as to why i didnt realise this chapter was here
anyways that was a long explanation that you probably didn't need.
but i loved the chapter
it's so cute
and even cuter still
was that my iTunes started playing Anyone Else But You near the end
which i thought was cute
and scarily coincidental
i loved it
and...is there going to be an epilogue?

izzie
Oooh.Look.A Cat
2008-02-05
ch 8,
abusewow
talk about dramatically awesome
cliffhanger
girl fight
revealed feelings
a (sort of) break up
and drunkeness
all in one awesome chapter
i definitely can't wait for more
and i'm gonna miss it when it's gone
six years is definitely a long time lol

izzie
LoneWolf-234
2008-02-05
ch 9,
abuseYAH! *dances around happily (just read chapter 9)*
finally! loves al the drama!Cant wait for more ^.^
Lorango911
2008-02-05
ch 9,
abusegh my god. oh my god. oh my god. he is such a prick for waiting this long. You're a jerk for waiting this long to update! No i'm just kidding. I totally wasn't expecting 'IAN' to help her out of the pol. But afterwards i was thinking there should have been some love at first sight moment with him... lol hahahaha no no i'm j/p j/p. Anyway totally cliched! I love it. I got this warm fuzzy feeling at the end of the chapter. hahaha call me!
Alenor
2008-02-05
ch 9,
abusehm...interesting. can't wait for more! they're finally getting it together! ~ Alenor.
Valiant
2008-02-05
ch 9, anon.
abuseack, please tell me you're writing more? :D :D I LOVE it!
goodbyemylover
2008-02-05
ch 9,
abuseTHEY FINALLY KISSED!

after all their fights, arguments, miscommunication, etc...they finally made up!! (and made out, haha).

update soon! i can't wait to read more!
xchocolatemintx
2008-01-12
ch 8,
abuseCan't wait till the next chapter. Keep up the great work.
Little Obnoxious Girl
2008-01-09
ch 8, anon.
abuseUpdate soon, please! I really like the cliche of it all, and the circumstances. It makes me smile and pissed off at the same time (because of CERTAIN people, but then they make me smile when they do something sweet).

Thanks for sharing !

- LOG
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