wow...that's...wow.
That's all I can say...wow!

agree with you wholeheartedly. poor, poor, child. but all too true...

baibaiyukie

*frowning*... sO sad... well written! *claps loudly while wiping away tears*

V_V This is way sad.

"I was made out of love and was made out trust,

That much you can give me...I know you must"

That was really powerful and it really struck me. Keep up the writing!

So many emotions ...

Pity for the child.

Anger towards the adult.

There is nothing left to say but beautifully done! That couldn't have been an easy topic to deal with.

To be very honest, I didn't know this poem was by you. The title just caught my attention. But since it IS by you, thank you for reviewing my work. I just started writing recently and it meant a lot to me.

Very very very very very lovely! Well i feel sad and all but i love the way you put this. I could hug you...awe heck! ::Hugs:: heh, ahem i am not in love with you but it touched my oh so very much your poem... i'm going to read all your other shtuff

Ame

So sad...

keep writing :

kick ass poem, it was very well written.

Oh, that's so sad. I've heard of that before! You're not disturbing, but the whole idea is! Brings back videos I watched in school...

CoOl! In My HaPpY sTaTe!

(hug Kirby so he can feel even more happy)

Kirby means this story and/or poem rocked!

Chibiheartdragon

OMG. The poor child.

nice poem. rather disturbing. especially the 4th line... everytime i read anything, a story or article or poem about sexual abuse like this, i get really edgy whenever im in the same room as my dad. *shudders* anyway. nice poem, just like all your other poems...and thanks for reviewing my poem, which is a mound of crap compared to your work. thanks for the sweet comment anyway. :)

hey it's a great poem you write really good you know. well I really like it .

;_;

KG, as always, your poem is deep and very dramatic. I understand the pg rating, and it is another great piece of work by yourself. keep it up.

Sexual abuse is a very serious thing to make a poem about, but you still managed to keep the Drama feeling alive. Keep up the good work.