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Reviews For: Fate's Thread

Mockingbird5 2004-07-23 ch 8,	abuseIs "unrelaxed" a word? Maybe "agitated"? Also, "yeah" doesn't quite seem to fit. I'm imagining all this as once upon a time in an English accent, and it feels a bit out-of-place. But I love "Morning came slowly, like a deadly disease creeping over the land." Still very funny, and very suspenseful...
Mockingbird5 2004-07-22 ch 3,	abuseThis is really funny. I mean,really. This is really funny. I love it. And I can't wait to find out what happens next... From your #1 fan
Mockingbird5 2004-07-19 ch 1,	abuseA few typing errors, but really, this is quite good! Gets a little confusing with the Roberts, but then again, maybe it's supposed to.
cacter02 2003-07-09 ch 5,	abuseGreat story! Love the humour you slip in nicely. Plot's also great, and original. Keep up the good work.
Mebrireth 2002-12-26 ch 4,	abuseAh-ha, my triumphant return to the reviewing ranks! Or not, whatever. Anyways, definite good chapter (grammer much?) and I love the plot development without revealing too much. Now we have a prohpecy to contend with, delivered by a smart-aleck fairy, I definitely loved that part. I liked it better with the commentary...but yeah. Brain seems to be in a muddled state and coherence is proving to be difficult, so I will pretty much leave it at that. All I have to say is that it seems as though you are in busy times as the updates appear to be few and far in between, but I can relate to that. So I will merely resort to the tactic that gets me to write, unbridled without shame begging. Please, please, please write more. Your story is a definite pick-up and gives me a nice warm feeling to know that our generation is not totally illiterate, generation X my foot...but okay then, write more, I will be checking up on this!
Allegretto 2002-10-28 ch 4,	abuseCool! You have a way of making very clear characters and adding in the smallest and best details in it. I like it! It's nice and funny. Keep going!
Lynn Wells 2002-09-17 ch 1,	abuseWow! I love it! I think it’s the greatest thing since sliced bread! :P ok, I’ll just stop now. Anyway I just have to say that I love how it really does have humor. I've read many books under that subtitle that don't have the slightest funny thing about them, and personally I can't write humor that well. But yours is truly good.
Mebrireth 2002-08-17 ch 3,	abuseHey again! I finally read your new chapter, obviously, and again, I love it! Your style makes it so that it actually IS funny, where most would fail at that. Oh, and now there's a plot twist, a new voice at the end, eh? Wonder who that is, well, you're doing a good job with the updates, so go ahead and keep it up! And again, I can't understand why others are not enjoying this! That's just wrong. Okay then, until the next chapter!
Mebrireth 2002-07-30 ch 2,	abuseOkay, now there's plenty of mystery in which to taunt your faithful readers with. Which reminds me, why is no one else reviewing?! It just makes me sick, well maybe not, but disturbed at the least, to see the good authors get snubbed and the, shall we say, mediocre ones, get a lot more than is due. Of course, sometimes the combination works out and you get good authors getting nice reviews, but I digress. As for your story, still funny, but now confusing, and the only way to remedy that is an update. I want to know about this oracle and parchment and such. And I would edit yours, but I actually wouldn't dare. (That makes slight sense.) If it aint broke, don't fix it. :) Alrighty then, until the next update!
Mebrireth 2002-07-19 ch 1,	abuseWell, after you gave me such marvelous (and beneficial) reviews, I decided to check your stuff out, and wouldn't you know it, this stuff is good! Very, very good. Writing has a unique and subtle style, making fun of what would otherwise be a serious situation. Plot seems to be original, a rarity these days, and lives up to the humor genre it is placed in, another rarity. Of course, there is one little problem, one that can easily be fixed, update! Come now, I have faith in you, write more!

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