Interesting chapters. But the thing is; I'm totally confused. I have a little trouble grasping this world of yours. Sometimes it seems normal and like earth but then it seems like some weird fantasy place. I suppose I'll get more used to it as the story continues.
Oh, and that was a really awful place to stop, now I can't wait to read what happens next. I hate cliff-hangers.
Is the Cenalyis person Merian's 'mother'?

this is very interesting so far, FD!

love ya
Azalais :)

I really don't see what's so squirky about this story. I think it's really good and you need to right more!!! Now I said!! I want to know what's going to happen next!!!!!!!Sorry.....^_^!