Your delightful pointlessness astounds me again! Brava! Brava! Although actually, this story sounds like a dream I had once...yi yi yi...

That ending was rather abrupt (that's spelt wrong but I don't care!) and it was a bit wrong that you become a ghost if you can't resist the enchantment and you become one if you can. It's unfair! He should have become a polterguist! What was with the creepy French voice? And did you make it a creepy vioce because it was French? ::grin::

A bit weird but...

~BLue Yeti

That was really creepy. I'm going to run off and read next bit now.

sarah, this was a VERY strange story. and i u have a geek he should have blue eyes, brown hair, glasses and be called daniel. yep. also i think ur next fic should be about the simpsons. yep. neways, it was a cool story nonthless. yep
btw, this is nic. obviously

OH THIS WAS HORRIBLE! No, no. I'm just joking... very good... kinda... mystical... I think it could have been beter with more descriptions... but I understand... it's just fluff, but very good fluff.

k00l idea. An alive ghost...