I read chapters one through thirteen all in one shot, but eventually had to sleep, lol.
Anyway,I thoroughly enjoyed this story. You portrayed a real relationship with real characters, and real problems. What I also really loved was the your character grew. It makes a story a lot better, and feel a lot more whole when at least one character does some growing. You also portray emotions amazingly well. It makes the story feel more real. AND(lol) you made your characters, especially the main, have flaws and problems. I can't tell you how many stories I have read and all the characters are these barbie perfect people that could never have anything wrong with them. If I continue thinking of things I loved about this story I will be going on and on, lol. Thank you for such a lovely stroy, and I will definitaley be checking out your other stories!

wow. this was a great story... a few times i got annoyed and just wanted to beat Lies' and Colin's heads together, but hey, it proves that your story was good enough to draw a reaction. awesome job (:

~Shayla

I love this story. It is very gentle and yet gripping in the intensity of the emotions felt by all the characters. It is well planned out with each character having their moments and I love the dialogue.

~H-H

Wow lots of drama thats for sure. It took them long enough. Cute ending. I liked all of the characters. She was so confused that I kinda felt depressed for her. Good job!

hiya

This story is great, i really enjoyed reading it. But there is something missing though, i can't really put my finger on it. I think it needs more depth to it. I dunno, it could just be the mood i'm in today.

Great writing :)

Angel

sweet.

i really like this piece. and i love your note regarding copyrights! i heart it.

okay... reading this after best deceptions and looking at the date, i can say that ur writing has certainly improved. Your writing is good in the first place, but plot wise has gotten much better. In this story i was uber confused how things between Liesel and Colin started and how they morphed straight to angst after 2 weeks. And Aaron seemed so shallow. And well Kat and Katie... One time you wrote 'Kate' and i had to infer who was it. Maybe it's better to have more different names? Anyway dont be sad, coz this is one of your earlier works and i think ur latest work is awesome =)

i loved this so much!

Geez, Colin's seriously bipolar or something.

i loved your story. the ending was perfect and i loved every moment that lies and colin spent together. i cant wait to read other stories from you.

Don't like simpleplan! ):
But nice story. I like music/romance mixes. (:

aw i loved this story. i did think that colin cried way too much for a guy no offense but thats just me. maybe i just hang around with guys who dont have emotions at all lol. you are a fantastic writer and i'm so happy it was happy ending
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,..at last ive finished reading your story,..wheww,..the story is great,..hahaha cant get it out of my brain,..hhehe,..lolz,..but i do hope you make the ending long,..cause it seems kinda short to me,..oh well,..juz keep on writing good stories,..ill be w8ng,..and wud u plz update me,..hirs my email yah!

,..hi it's olredy 3:30 in d morning im feeling kinda groggy buti cant stop myself from reading your masterpiece,..damn u r really good in writing i do hope u keep on writing good stories,..im becoming a huge fan of urs,..i do hope collin and lesl wud b geder,..and collin stop acting lyk a jerk,..ahahah,..and will u plz update me if ur writing another stories...