Nice. really liked it!

Amazing! I loved the story!
Megan :)

This is really good.

amazing story. loved it.

awwww. i esp. luv d fact that they dont hate each other in d beginning lyk all cliche stories :)

very cute story

Turning out great so far :) Completely captivated already haha. I'd love to continue and finish reading in one sitting, but I can't. (I don't know why I just told you that.)

Anyways, great job so far! (As always!)

I am noticing a few typos, though. I was trying to figure out what you were saying, but I just replaced those words with whatever word I thought you meant.

Again, awesome job! :)

this is really good I luv this plot and I think you should write another story!

this is so... argh. i have no adjectives

I LOVE THIS. nice conflict. i soo totally love Colin more than Aaron. and i hope Melissa turns out to be a better character. GOOD LUCK

i like this. it's good, no stupid cliches, has a good start, first line a real hooker... all in all, a great first chapter.

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AMAZING! Your stories are SO addicting! I wanna read another one, but i actually have some things to do . . . like eat. hahaha. keep writing!

CrazyCowgirl101

i sorta have a bad feeling about Aaron . . . like its too good to be true . . . maybe it's just because I have bad expirience with the name . . . this is good! REALLY good!

C: I love how you write... with all those twists and such. Yet another story I couldn't wait to finish hahaha. Great job! Very sweet ending I must say, hehe.