I really do hope you finish your other story soon. I really want to know what will happen in the next chapter. So put up the next chapter ASAP.

~Twisted Rose

Oh hi!! i just reviewed for one of your other things like one sec ago!! wow lol well i think i really did read this before, but who knows but its good..wellllll ima goin byebyezz

Dude, why is his SN all numbers...? JW...AND DUDE!!! YOU CAN BRING UP CONVO'S AFTER THEY'RE ALLREADY CLOSED!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!!? SWEETNESS! Oh, and it's the National Enquirer...I saw it the other day at Stop And Shop...-.-;; Anyways, I'm going to go now...LATER!
-Me

“Good. I have the Waverly’s phone number; I’ll call you when I get details. Bye,” Lynn stated.
“Bye.” Lynn...

You should add right there that Briget is the one saying bye the second time.

“I want on this case,” Lynn...

That doesn't make the most sense. Could you fix it so it flows easier? Like..."I want in on this case" or something along those lines. And I think the "Charley" from the TV show is spelt Charlie. Someone correct me if I'm wrong. Call phone? I think you mean Cell phone, right? LoL Tupid typos! Hehe...You just HAD to put the spoiler in, didn't you? And that wasn't a short chapter! It's long compared to Poth and Bed! Update soon!

Where the hell did Morgan Thorton come from? You didn't mention Max and Lucas getting downstairs either. No footsteps on the stairs, etc. Sorry, in kind of a critical mood right now...oO;; Good job though! I like it better than the original! ^.^

This is really good so far, although I think I allready read this part, most likely. I dont really know how far I got though, well, it is good!! VERY!!