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| angel-Janna 2006-09-30 ch 1,  | abusei love how you portrayed the moon as fat, bloated, and not at all beautiful like many seem to think it is. well done.keep writing please!I need more!!Janna |
| Kaguara 2004-07-14 ch 1, | abuseOMG! I love this! It's really good. Is it about a werewolf? Sounds like it to me. Well ne ways I'm off to read another of your works! |
| Saranacian Freak 2003-10-26 ch 1, | abuseM..."A great corpulent shining orb in a sea of glittering blackness." Delicious, delicious imagery. I hunger for it...hmm... |
| Sun Rose Fox 2003-05-25 ch 1, | abuseooh nasty. warewolf type thing, eh? a bit frustrated? ;) |
| promiscuous girl 2003-04-27 ch 1, | abuseIn a way, I'm not sure what exactly you're talking about, but it radiates power. Love it. Sugar Cookies and Whipped Cream -- Lianna |
| Heart of the Sword (FPNET i... 2003-03-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou set up a detailed picture in my mind. ~Heart of the Sword |
| karmakaze 2002-10-19 ch 1, | abuseWow! I like how you put yourself into mythology as an ancient character. Very origional and deep. Keep writing! |
| Andromeda 2002-08-17 ch 1, | abusewow, that was just beautiful! You have wonderful description and amazing imagery. You used so many words that aren't very common in poetry. I think my favorite part was how you described the moon. You didn't just say it was some big ball of light, but you made it come to life and really went into detail with that. wonderful job! *claps* I can't wait to read the rest of your work! |
| annamarya 2002-08-08 ch 1, | abuseThis was powerful. I dont make much use of my words so I will keep it at this. The falcon hath bourne my mate away And on this bed there lyeth a knight His wound is bleeding day and night By his bedside kneeleth a maid And she weepeth both night and day I see myself wandering in lust at night. Bravo |
| Thyra 2002-08-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is so beautifully flowing... the hunger and the anticipation.. OYE! It just dripps over my eyes that 'hunger' for more, yet I am satisified. Brilliant! I bow to you! |
| Wall of Fire 2002-08-04 ch 1, | abusebeautiful imagery. the only thing i didn't get was the three sets of teeth, please explain. |
| Familiar Alien 2002-07-31 ch 1, | abuseHe's a gargoyl, right? Great poem/fic dude, keep it up! |