Wow, I think this is great. Plus, it's very true at the end. You were right, I would like your writings. Anyways, keep it up, I really think your stuff is better than mine, so use ure skills and write more!
Whoa...Craptacular is too small a word to describe the greatness in this poem. It's beyond words--well, almost. But just to give you the sliver of the praise that I CAN put into words: this is one great MASTERpiece of a poem. Bravo!