Ah! I'm confused! What happened after the end of the last chapter? Did their carraige break or something? And Miss Van Buren. Who is she?

Thank you so much for posting the rest of this story! Your writing is fantastic and I truly loved the story, I guess that makes me a smidge morbid as well

Amy

i love this story, and your writing is so mature sounding. i'm so amazed; i can never find writers on these types of websites with mature sounding writing. kudos to you :)

I just read the entire thing. I found this story and read straight through. I have a head ache and my eyes burn but it was totally worth it. I loved your spin on Cinderella, Brother's Grim style. This is definitely a favorite and is being marked as so.

You have got to be my favourite author of all time!! Your stories rock, amazing stuff :D

I personally don't like repeats of an original story, but this by far is a better representation of Cinderella. Great story, I like it a lot. Your wording/character names/emotions are perfect.

Oh! Great twist ending! This was fantastic!

Hey... I remember reading this story quite a few years ago. What's all the chapters missing? :( Bring them back so we can read again! This is one of my favorite stories on here.

Im confused. This can't be the end? Is it really over?

Another great chapter, I like that you made the step sisters more sinister

Amy

I love Cindy's sense of humor, congrats on not making her timid and shy

Thank you, Amy

Excellent! You are so descriptive you could picture everything! I don't know what the first verion of this story was like but as of chapter 1 this one is terrific

Amy

I must say!
This is quite a lovely story!

I really liked this story.
At first I was hesitant about reading it because it was Cinderella-esque but you made it really stand on it's own. I liked the dark humor. I wish there had been more funny dialogue between Cindy and Christian just because it made me laugh so much.

pretty good so far. Can't wait to read more.