Right. Well first things first, this had some great content. Some great phrases and expressions. You could hear the emotion through the words.

However, the let down was the layout. It's so difficult to read in this format. I struggled to stay focused on it because it was a huge smelly chunk. I believe you could set this out in an easier to read format and it would do the terrific content justice!

This is beautiful, and oddly, I can relate to every word. keep it up!

very good, **. lol