Nice Poem! I think its very unique to write about the wind as an enemy, I always loved the wind. Great poem anyway, conflicting views are great to hear!

~Persimone

I like the image I'm getting of the wind as a sprite with a puckish sense of humor. Very nice.

Oooo...I like this! I wrote a poem about the wind, too...it's called "The Airy Spirit". ^^ The wind is a fickle little bugger, isn't he?

Keep writing!

~Namir Swiftpaw

I love the personification that you give. Keep up the writing. You go ahead and write things the way you want to. Don't take anything from anybody. ^_^

Pretty cool. Some cool ideas in there.
Interesting Personification of the wind.

~Lub~

Goten's *ReAl* girlfriend

Woah. I never really read any poetry where the wind was a moster thing. THis was good!

I like the descriptions and all, but I don't want to put you down with my suggestion but this will hopefully help you. It's confusing. But I love it a lot ^_^
Sayonara and God Bless.