OMG! YOU NEED TO UPDATE THIS STORY! GOODNESS! PLZ! I'VE BEEN WAITING!

I UPDATED LIKE RAIN! NOW YOU NEED TO UPDATE!

yo! it's me, heiko! btw, u need 2 update dis story, cause i luv it! my reviewers finally got me off of writers' block, and i posted another chapter of like rain and i'm almost done w/ another! please check it out

*huggles* I love it! The plot is very interesting, and your charactors are very well developed. My only suggestion is this: Try adding a bit more description in some places. For example, I have no idea as to what Kyrithin wore to the ceremony, as it was never described. I know it looked like Meruna's, only a different color...but you never told me what that color was...T_T Otherwise, this is a wonderful story - that's going on my favorite's list^^ Update soon!

YOU NEED TO UPDATE!
-bye

Weeh, that was long, but nobody minds...long chappies are better than the shorts. ^_^ nice shiny new chapter 6, and you even updated it on my b-day~! only thing that bothers is me is that i'm confused about the war thing that they're going to be fighting for and where in the hell Vahla and Merillion are (besides that they're far away). hehehe, you should draw us a map of their journey and where they're going next. But hopefully you get up chp 7 up soon
Otherwise happy thanksgiving~~

Oh, and the reason why there were no updates is because i hardly ever use that account now. But you're right, i've been slacking off, but half of a chapter of a new story and a fresh new poem are on its way to being posted.=^-^=

Assuming you've guessed who iam by now,
ciaociao~~

YAY! AN UPDATE!

oka, great update. nice and long, but not boring. You handled the multiple meetings with that silver guy- whats-his-name- very well. Good flow throughout.

Meruna's adorable. And she rides a paint horse! hooray! just like my Cheif *sniph* [i used to ride a paint named Cheif in my stables before he was sold away]

Kyrithin's awesome. great job with her. Kinda creepy, the way everything's happening within her, but very interesting nonetheless. What's up with the eyes? rhetorical question- i know you'll answer it later. Great job with character development on her, makes you really feel the pain [kyrithin's not gonna die is she? a! kyrithin's gonna die! *WA*] [ignore the excerpt *glares at CHIBBIINSANE*] Balthazar's not very well developed yet though. may want to work on giving us a little more about him, about what he's thinking, feeling, etc. I know he's dense, but you may want to express his persona in a little more than just calling him stoopid, such as having his mindtrack go in circles and him giving up on thinking. LOL. [hee hee, I know im being a hypocrite, but I'm honestly having second thoughts on dreymacus' persona]

whew! rambling AGAIN *glares at self in mirror* *mirror cracks*

keep updating! it makes us happy *Chibbiinsane and pont wave*!

-_-~Kim, I'm dyin' here, you gotta update...OR I'LL BITE YOUR HEAD OFF!

Anyway, on a lighter note- What's up? I got an A in mrs. Scott's class for the quarter...YAY! (realizes that she's the only one cheering and slowly lowers her hands to her sides and runs to hide behind the curtain) Guess what, I finally updated Nightstalkers. Go ME! (people start staring at the curtain) I hope you like it, It was 9 pages long, and that's when I cut it in half. Otherwise It would have been like sixteen pages long! Hehe, talk to you later,
-Aeris aka Heiko-chan

You know, the worst thing a fictionpress.com author can do is make their readers wait for more than a month for a stupid chapter. You, my friend, have succeeded in doing so. Now, review within the next few weeks or I will NOT update chapter 18 of Absolute Destiny Apocalypse or chapter 2 of Nightstalkers, and Merle Goddess will not update the next chapter of Lost Searching XP

-Aeris

You know, the worst thing a fictionpress.com author can do is make their readers wait for more than a month for a stupid chapter. You, my friend, have succeeded in doing so. Now, review within the next few weeks or I will NOT update chapter 18 of Absolute Destiny Apocalypse or chapter 2 of Nightstalkers, and Merle Goddess will not update the next chapter of Lost Searching XP

-Aeris

I don't understand the part about them sinking their swords in their graves.

Try and make Crystania's more formal. She is a ancient dead sorceress I think, and ancient people talk formal.

Nothing more

Sly

List of mistake

"It was hard to breath the think, misty air" you messed up with thick and think

"You were screaming in your sleeplike something was ripping " forgot space between sleep and like

"Kyrithin slashed with the blade and twirled away from her antagonist’s blade at eh same time." mispelled the at the end before same

I think thats all, but here's something that I like, "The dance had begun"
Its a wonderful phrase when descriping swordplay. Its practicaly a dance with death. Nice job

Sly

This style, those words, i feel like i'm in that time.
I don't see anything wrong.
Are you sure you don't read what you write, because this is perfect.

YAY! You updated! It's really good, and ten pages long too! Just hurry it up with chapter 6! Maruna's starting to remind me of a miniture version of Erin, do you think?

at long last, i'm reviewing~!! yeah, i know i was supposed to do it last week but it just slipped my mind. grr stupid biology report.
yes, balthazar is overeacting a lot. she just got up from using up a ton of her energy~~! of course she won't be perkyperkyperky her first few seconds of being awake. even without the weird thing about magical-aliens-are-trying-to-communicate-with-me-in-my-head-and-i-don't-understand-a-word. and stop making me hungry~~!! crackers are useless when you're in munchie-bingeing mood. i like kala ^-^. meruna is starting to get on my nerves, even tho she's just a kid and i know i act that way too when i've had too much espresso -_-+. but the dress part was cute ^_^. must be a real tomboy. i'd loff to have an excuse to wear a dress =0^_^0=. so they're going to be in the ritual, huh? yes, meruna inhales too much sugar right after/before it and then blabs to the whole village about what it is. well, i don't think you'll make her that dumb.
try explaining more of kyrithin's (and balthazar's)history tho. the deeper meaning of why people are chasing them besides the reason that they are uber powerful and past and yadayadayada.
and you need to tell me how to do your bold letters. i've tried using html and saving the thing as a text, but it just comes out with symbols instead of a italicised word. oh well. fanfiction is ** anyway. always breaking down. well, seminar is almost over and i have a lot to pack so, see you on the weekend or whatever i guess~~!